SORROW, Jealousy

[JEALOUSY]

[STYLE=color: ba0011; font-family: arial narrow; font-size: 35px; letter-spacing: -3px;]♠ JEALOUSY [/style]

[atrb=cellpadding,0,true][atrb=cellspacing,3,true][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=valign, top][atrb=style, color: f9f9f9;][STYLE=width: 100px; padding: 10px; background-color: 0883a6;][/style] [STYLE=background-color: 0883a6; width: 110px; padding: 5px; color: ededed; font-family: arial narrow; letter-spacing: 2px; font-size: 11px; text-align: center; text-transform: uppercase; margin-top: -10px;]TWENTY-SEVEN[/style] [STYLE=background-color: 0883a6; width: 110px; padding: 5px; color: ededed; font-family: arial narrow; letter-spacing: 2px; font-size: 11px; text-align: center; text-transform: uppercase; margin-top: -10px;]MALE[/style] [STYLE=background-color: 0883a6; width: 110px; padding: 5px; color: ededed; font-family: arial narrow; letter-spacing: 2px; font-size: 11px; text-align: center; text-transform: uppercase; margin-top: -10px;]HETEROSEXUAL[/style] [STYLE=background-color: 0883a6; width: 110px; padding: 5px; color: ededed; font-family: arial narrow; letter-spacing: 2px; font-size: 11px; text-align: center; text-transform: uppercase; margin-top: -10px;]PRISONER[/style] [STYLE=background-color: 0883a6; width: 110px; padding: 5px; color: ededed; font-family: arial narrow; letter-spacing: 2px; font-size: 11px; text-align: center; text-transform: uppercase; margin-top: -10px;]SORROW, DARK WEAPON[/style] [STYLE=background-color: 0883a6; width: 110px; padding: 5px; color: ededed; font-family: arial narrow; letter-spacing: 2px; font-size: 11px; text-align: center; text-transform: uppercase; margin-top: -10px;]MADE BY MINNIE OF BTN![/style]

[atrb=style, color: f9f9f9;][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; font-family: Arial narrow; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 3px; text-transform: uppercase; background-color: 525252; border-bottom: 3px solid #f9f9f9;]( JEALOUSY) -- ☆[/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; background-color: d5d5d5; font-family: arial; color: 313131; font-size: 11px;]★ N A M E: Cyrus Evandar ★ D. O. B.: August 5 ★ H E I G H T: 6 feet ★ W E I G H T: 145 lbs ★ A P P E A R A N C E: Blonde, messy hair, wicked grin[/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; font-family: Arial narrow; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 3px; text-transform: uppercase; background-color: 525252; border-bottom: 3px solid #f9f9f9;]★ PERSONALITY[/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; background-color: d5d5d5; font-family: arial; color: 313131; font-size: 11px;]★ G E N E R A L: Jealousy certainly lives up to his name—he is jealous of everyone and covets everything he does not possess, and even some things he does possess. He is often distracted by his jealousy and is always attempting to have the best of everything. He is constantly under the impression that, “Someone somewhere is better than him,” and he fights constantly to beat those someones. ★ L I K E S & D I S L I K E S: ♥ new things/change ♥ shiny things ♥ to be the best ♥ fighting ♥ animals ♥ sour and bitter tasting foods ✗ being beaten or bested ✗ sweet things ✗ being in small spaces or being locked up ✗ really, really happy people ✗ being alone ★ H O B B I E S & H A B I T S: ⋆ killing people ⋆ despising everything and everyone ⋆ talking to himself ⋆ pissing people off ★ S E C R E T S & F E A R S: ⋆ he may not be entirely straight ⋆ Hates the dark ⋆ being locked up ⋆ his brother will get revenge on him ★ A M B I T I O N S: ⋆ to be number one ⋆ to have everything he doesn’t have ⋆ to get out of that damned box [/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; font-family: Arial narrow; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 3px; text-transform: uppercase; background-color: 525252; border-bottom: 3px solid #f9f9f9;]★ HISTORY[/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; background-color: d5d5d5; font-family: arial; color: 313131; font-size: 11px;] Cyrus was practically born with an inferiority complex. As a child he grew up under the shadow of his older brother, a tall, strong, successful Weapon who easily captured the affections of everyone he met. Contrariwise, Cyrus has always found difficulty in convincing others to like him and was often buried behind his universally-adored brother, and whatever he did it was never as good as his brother had done previous. He soon grew weary of being treated as a less-worthy afterthought and he became vicious and enraged. He became Jealous. He took his brother’s life at the age of ten and openly admitted his guilt. His family, blinded by the innocence they thought they possessed, could not believe what he had done and spent quite a long time in complete denial. They could not stand to lay eyes upon their only remaining son and disowned him—abandoning him in the facility which he was held. He never saw them again. Cyrus spent years locked away for his murderous crime (15 years), and he was utterly alone when he was released. He regretted the repercussions of his actions, but he would never regret ridding himself of the misery his brother had brought him. He spent about two years on his own in which he let his anger out on the world: murdering several people and when he was put in “Pandora’s Box” it just brought back memories of being locked away. He's been imprisoned for 400 years and can’t wait to get out and kill the ones who detained him, then take everything he doesn’t have from those who do. [/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; font-family: Arial narrow; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 3px; text-transform: uppercase; background-color: 525252; border-bottom: 3px solid #f9f9f9;]★ ABILITIES[/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; background-color: d5d5d5; font-family: arial; color: 313131; font-size: 11px;] As a Dark Weapon, Jealousy appears as several knives connected to each other with thin wires. The knives appear in many different sizes and shapes, some crooked, some straight. A few look more like daggers. As the knives he can slice his enemies to pieces. He can wrap the thin, but unbreakable wires around his prey and squeeze so hard they fall apart. ★ S P E C I A L A B I L I T I E S: ⋆ Jealousy can sense others’ presences, sort of like their energies ⋆ He can also sense how powerful an enemy is ⋆ Cyrus does not bother with trying to control or suppress his Insanity Wavelength and has long since lost the ability to do so. He lets his Wavelength disperse as far and wide as it likes and affect whoever or whatever it chooses. He will sometimes find things falling around him or wallpaper peeling because of it. ⋆ Jealousy can steal practically anything without being caught. He is a master pickpocket, as he wants everything. So if he doesn’t have it he takes it for himself. --- (weapon) ★ W E A P O N T Y P E: ⋆ knives (purely offensive) ★ W E A P O N D E S C R I P T I O N: ⋆ He becomes numerous knives connected with thin, sharp , unbreakable wire ⋆ Knives will come out of his fingertips while still in his human form ★ T E C H N I Q U E S: ⋆ Stabbing Spine: Knives can protrude from each of Jealousy’s vertebrae on his back to protect him from rear attacks. The knives can appear at any length or width and whenever Jealousy chooses. All of his shirts contain slits and tears because of this. ⋆ Along with the ability to project knives from his spine, Jealousy can project knives from anywhere on his body as he wishes. [/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; font-family: Arial narrow; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 3px; text-transform: uppercase; background-color: 525252; border-bottom: 3px solid #f9f9f9;]★ OUT OF CHARACTER[/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; background-color: d5d5d5; font-family: arial; color: 313131; font-size: 11px;]★ F A C E - C L A I M: [b]Katekyo:HitmanReborn![/b] - Belphegor, [i]Jealousy[/i] ★ N A M E: Amber ★ C H A R A C T E R S: Firo [/style]

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[JEALOUSY]

If someone could review, give feedback, that'd be great. I think he's pretty much finished. (:

[ORDER]

Hi there! ^_^ I've taken it upon myself to review your application, and before I accept it there are a few things I would like you to edit:

1) At the very top in big red letters, you should put Jealousy's birth name.
2) For the appearance, could you provide some links to pictures of him? Otherwise other members might get confused as to what he actually looks like...
3) If one of his secrets is that he "may not be entirely straight", I would change his sexual orientation to "heterosexual(?)" just for coherence purposes.
4) Jealousy has a Special Soul called "Sorrow of Jealousy"; make sure to add that section in.
5) If you want to apply for such an important position, you need to have A LOT more detail.

If you need a reference when making the edits, look at this application. Mheera is also a Sorrow, and her application is incredible, so I believe you could benefit from looking at her app

Looking forward to RPing with you!
~Sakuran