KISHIN EGG, Berserker Maleagant

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[atrb=style, color: f9f9f9;][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; font-family: Arial narrow; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 3px; text-transform: uppercase; background-color: 525252; border-bottom: 3px solid #f9f9f9;]BERSERKER MALEAGANT-- ☆[/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; background-color: d5d5d5; font-family: arial; color: 313131; font-size: 11px;]★ N A M E: "Berserker Maleagant", formerly Max Nekoda ★ D. O. B.: November 15th ★ H E I G H T: 6 feet and 0 inches ★ W E I G H T: 172 lbs ★ A P P E A R A N C E: Unnatural white hair, one green eye and one red eye. Always wearing red jacket with steel attached in various places. Often wearing black trousers, black shirt, red steel-toe boots and two black belts that wrap around the area of his waist over his jacket in order to stop it from getting caught on something or falling off in a fight.[/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; font-family: Arial narrow; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 3px; text-transform: uppercase; background-color: 525252; border-bottom: 3px solid #f9f9f9;]★ PERSONALITY[/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; background-color: d5d5d5; font-family: arial; color: 313131; font-size: 11px;]★ G E N E R A L: ⋆ Alert ⋆ Determined ⋆ Warlike ⋆ Decisive ⋆ Unpredictable ⋆ Unforgiving ⋆ Destructive ⋆ Quick-Thinking ⋆ Impolite ⋆ Reckless ★ L I K E S & D I S L I K E S: ♥ Fighting ♥ Power ♥ Strong Opponents ♥ Rage ♥ Chaos ♥ Noise ♥ Destruction ✗ Being called by his real name ✗ Being reminded of his past ✗ The DWMA/Shibusen ✗ Weaklings ✗ Order ✗ Quiet ✗ Witches ★ H O B B I E S & H A B I T S: ⋆ Training ⋆ Hunting ⋆ Pulling on the collar of his jacket ⋆ Twitching when he wants to fight ★ S E C R E T S & F E A R S: ⋆ His past as a Meister ⋆ Death Seeker ⋆ Dying outside of battle ⋆ Remembering his past ★ A M B I T I O N S: ⋆ Become a Kishin ⋆ to destroy the DWMA ⋆ then die at the hands of a powerful opponent(s) [/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; font-family: Arial narrow; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 3px; text-transform: uppercase; background-color: 525252; border-bottom: 3px solid #f9f9f9;]★ HISTORY[/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; background-color: d5d5d5; font-family: arial; color: 313131; font-size: 11px;] Max was born an only child to parents who were both Meisters, inheriting the ability to be a Meister from them. He spent his younger years training hard and hoping that one day he could become a powerful Meister and to create a great Death Weapon in doing so, if only because he wanted to follow in his parents footsteps. This was only encouraged by his parents who had always wanted their child to be successful, the fact that he was willing to do so on his own only made them happier. The time came for Max to enter the DWMA, and he did so happily. He partnered up with a Zweihander Weapon by the name of Ada Kuhn. The two got along quite well, both having powerful ambitions to one day become powerful, although Ada was much more cautious and forward-thinking then Max. While Max always wanted to recklessly charge ahead into battle and think things up as he went along Ada instead insisted that they think about things first. In order to stop any more arguments it was decided that they would take turns in deciding what to do, which worked well... Up until one terrible day. It was Max's turn to decide what to do and, as always, he charged straight into battle against a single Kishin Egg. What Max didn't know was that it was not the only Kishin Egg, it was one of many. Fifteen, perhaps even twenty, ambushed Max and Ada. They did their best to fight off the Kishin Eggs but were overwhelmed with ease. In one last stand they attempted a Soul Resonance, thinning out their opponents but ultimately draining them. Max awoke to find himself a prisoner. It had been a set up by a Witch who wanted their hands on a Meister and Weapon partner for experiments. Max and Ada were the 'lucky' chosen, condemned to spend the next few years of their lives practically being tortured and force-fed Human Souls. Max clung on to his sanity for as long as he could, hoping that Ada was still alive and that soon the DWMA would come and save him. Even as days turned into week and weeks in months he held on. He was determined to escape, he had to save his friend. ... Then one day the Witch came and told Max all they needed to break him. Ada was dead, apparently having finally been destroyed by all the experimentations. All hope died, and it was replaced with rage. Pure, hateful and unending rage. Hate for the Witch who killed Ada, hate for the DWMA who taught children to be soldiers only to abandon them like they had Max and Ada, hate for himself... Who charged mindlessly into battle. It fuelled him. With the power of insanity at his back Max broke free, attacked the Witch and left them for dead. He blamed the DWMA and vowed that he would destroy the Academy by any means necessary. To do this he had but one option. Become a Kishin by devouring as many Human Souls as he could. He didn't care for the casualties and the suffering that he would cause so long as he could have his vengeance against the DWMA. It was all he cared about now. He decided that he would no longer go by his old name. When he consumed his first Human Soul he was reborn as Berserker Maleagant, an irredeemable Kishin Egg. From there he went on to consume all that he came across, slowly losing what sanity he had left in him in his quest to become a Kishin. He would destroy the DWMA, even if he had to die in order to do so. Ten years have passed since his journey into madness began, and he's still no closer to fulfilling his goal. He assumes the DWMA thinks 'Max Nekoda' is dead along with Ada. They might as well be right. [/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; font-family: Arial narrow; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 3px; text-transform: uppercase; background-color: 525252; border-bottom: 3px solid #f9f9f9;]★ ABILITIES[/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; background-color: d5d5d5; font-family: arial; color: 313131; font-size: 11px;]★ S P E C I A L S O U L: ⋆ N/A ★ S P E C I A L A B I L I T I E S: ⋆ Raw Anger: Maleagant has the ability to turn give the rage and insanity of his soul form. The 'Raw Anger' takes form as a kind of red aura which can envelope anything he is touching, including his own body, in order to empower it. If he so wishes he can even make the red aura take a form of it's own instead of just enveloping other forms, essentially allowing him to make it into a weapon in of itself, so long as it doesn't leave his touch. Essentially it makes his attacks stronger, making anyone hit by it feel twice as much pain and causing any injuries to last longer then they would otherwise. ⋆ Hate-Filled Charge: Maleagant charges his opponent with incredible speed with the intention of slamming into them. Upon connection the target gets knocked far back and becomes dazed for some time (2-3 posts) making it much harder for them to fight. ⋆ Toxic Rage: Maleagant attempts to pierce his opponents skin and infect them with his corrupted soul's rage. Those afflicted by this "Toxic Rage" become unable to distinguish friend from foe, attack wildly. Has a side-affect of making the afflicted stronger while it lasts, making any physical attacks stronger. [/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; font-family: Arial narrow; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 3px; text-transform: uppercase; background-color: 525252; border-bottom: 3px solid #f9f9f9;]★ OUT OF CHARACTER[/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; background-color: d5d5d5; font-family: arial; color: 313131; font-size: 11px;]★ F A C E - C L A I M: [b]BlazBlue[/b] - Ragna the Bloodedge, [i]Maleagant, Berserker[/i] ★ N A M E: Git ★ C H A R A C T E R S: N/A [/style]

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not bad overall, but i do have a few bones to pick with you.

• i know it was a surprise and all, but how powerful were they when they got to that fight? most students wouldn't be able to take on fifty kishin at once. even ten or twenty would be a handful. soul resonance would probably miss at least some of them. if you can convince me via pm that they could handle that many for a little while, then you can keep it. ♥
  
• using soul resonance without training wouldn't kill anyone, it would just be very taxing, energy-wise. if anything, he'd probably pass out or at least be unable to move for a bit. as such, would you mind altering that part of his history? maybe have them get separated and the kishin eggs kill him while he's laying there?
  
• this is just a suggestion, but maybe add something that would cement his reasoning for blaming the dwma for what happened? i have a weapon who blames the death weapons for not coming soon enough/killing the kishin egg that ate her parents sooner. maybe he had extra help, or at least called for help, and it didn't arrive soon enough? totally optional. i just like psychology, is all.
  
• would you mind explaining the raw anger ability a little better? i'm probably just dumb, but i don't quite understand what it does. :')
  

if you fix those things, you'll be good to go! and thank you so much for making a bad guy. we totally love bad guys. ♥♥♥ i'm totally psyched to see him in-play.

thank you very much for the changes! i feel like he's much more fleshed-out now, and his insanity is easier to understand (as well as his one ability). i feel bad for the kid, tbh, but i'm still very eager to see the course his madness takes in the future.

now get out there, you poor, crazy man.

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